Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > So Take A Step
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So Take A Step
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-29
i had to read this from my roomys laptop, mine is currently excreting feces.
anywho, i'm still reading and loving.Author's response
Thank you so much for all the reviews, you are awesome.So Take A Step
(#) whatkatydid 2006-10-30
PeterPan: me talking to you, patrick snoring, andy and joe playing some starwars game
It sounds like a creche, may I add, it would be the best creche in the world.......sighsAuthor's response
ROTFL, picturing FOB dressed up in robes and sitting in a barn with animals has got to be the funniest image ever.So Take A Step
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-18
The part in the chat where she doesn't know if she said something wrong and the conversation is on freeze - you wrote that perfectly. That's happened to me so many times before. The internet is a cool thing (duh) but sometimes it makes easy targets of people for misunderstandings and the like.
Very authentic. Kudos! :)Author's response
Thanks for the awesome review. I had conversation freezes, on the internet or on the phone, they both suck and make you feel like you said something wrong. I was just glad that I could write that part effectively.
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