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So Take A Step
(#) Tawney 2006-10-30
Seriously so cute! Loved it! I'm glad that Rory finally found abit of courage and made a move. I was going "Awwww" all the way through this chapter! hehe!XXAuthor's response
Awwwww, I'm glad you liked it! You see, everyone has that courage deep down inside. OK, enough of sounding like Confuscious (or however you spell his name) for me.So Take A Step
(#) moocow 2006-10-30
sexual frustration sucks ass.
but this story kicks assAuthor's response
Even if I could write stuff like that, I don't think it would have fit in this story. I mean, you heard Rory, she hasn't kissed a guy in two years! It would be totally out of character for anything besides some making out to happen right now. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story!So Take A Step
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2006-10-30
Wow. You couldn't ask for a more friggin cuter tale. I love how Pete brought Rory out of her shell, and the kiss scene was adorable. I totally get it, why the lights were out, and I can't wait to read your next update. :)Author's response
You wrote one amazing review! I can't picture Rory as anything else but cute, I really don't think she could pull off sexy. It's just not her. If anyone has any pics of what Rory might look like, feel free to post the link in a review.So Take A Step
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-30
it doesn't need to be sexual. try doing romance, i'm a sucker for it. i love the plot, the character development... i love you!Author's response
OK, my day just got a lot better after reading your review!!!So Take A Step
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-18
This was just perfect. Sex would have been just plain wrong under the given circumstances.
You did it just perfectly. :)Author's response
Thanks. Sex would have totally been out of character for Rory. She would never let herself do that with a guy she had only seen in person once. Well, twice if you count the concert at the beginning of the story, but she didn't talk to him, so it doesn't really count.
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