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I Remember
(#) whatkatydid 2006-10-30
I'm worried for Pete's, he's heading for a breakdown. I'm worried for Izzy and Patrick because I think they're falling in love.
Wow, I worry a lot.
This was by far one of the best chapters yet.....Author's response
Thank You, Thank You for this review. I was a little worried about this chapter. I don't want people to get discouraged from reading this story. It is going somewhere, really.I Remember
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-10-30
Bow-down-worthy chapter again! Things I would like to praise beyond my breath:
1) a) Your ability to render the incidents in a way that make them totally plausible and true to life. Your characters are multi-layered, make sense and are realisticly motivated. Heck, they have more personality than some of the people I hang out with (including me).
1) b) I especially marvel at Pete´s flash-back closet scene.
2) Making Patrick so perfect.
3) working in a Billy Joel song
I can´t say it enough: You´re a great writer, both on stylistic and plot levels. :)Author's response
Thanks! This chapter took me a long time to get out, so I hope it was worth the wait. Also, I'm glad you appreciate the Billy Joel. I couldn't help myself. And Patick is just so perfect...I had to make him that way.I Remember
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-31
wow. i don't know how you do it, but wow. the whole time i was thinking "kiss patrick" and by the end i was thinking "yes, pete and izzy are going to make it work". you are amazing at what you do. you would be even more amazing if you updated sooner ;)Author's response
Well, my whole plan was to make you all crazy with schizophrenia. It seems it is working.
Thanks for the wonderful reviews, and I will try to update more often. My car broke down, so I gots no wheres else to go.
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