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I Remember
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-04
I´m just gonna compliment you with a line from this chapter: " This was all too real and it hurt all too much. " I´m not the best at empathy but you really leave me no choice but to feel with Izzy, Patrick and yes, even Pete. I think I´ve marvelled at your realism and ambiance before, so just take my worship of those as a given.
There´s one thing I wonder about though: Does it hurt to be so wonderfully talented?Author's response
I don't think I can hurt due to the fact that I don't feel wonderfully talented, but thanks so much for the review. I blush.I Remember
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-04
how in the hell am i not the first to review? seriously, it's like 10 in the morning and i know you didn't post until after 3.
anywho, man...that's a lot of info for one chapter. i was almost sure Patrick was going to kiss her before she left. man.
so there's only one chapter left? i'm gonna have seperation anxiety when this ends :(Author's response
Aparently you aren't on your game...just kidding. Thanks for all your help last night with the whole profile crap! Coups to you!I Remember
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-04
OK. Here it goes.
Firstly, WOW.
Second, the plot was flawless and the integrity to the truth of your characters is immaculate. This is sign of a great writer.
Thirdly, I'm so sad this story will end but it has to, it isn't realistic to keep on writing, and I can't wait to read your future stories.
A couple of my favourite bits from this chapter were:
I just put my head down. I was so tired. I was tired of defending Pete, of hearing I'm sorry, of making up excuses, and especially of seeing that look of disappointment in Patrick's face. I was tired of it all. I adore the sentence structure here, I use this format a lot in my own writing but I love to see others do it too.
/"I'm going to miss you too, but you have to go get all smart," he said smiling down on me.
"And you have to go get famous," I said back. /
This is great line......
Well done. I mean it. I could hug you now.Author's response
Thanks so much for the too nice review. I had a lot of fun writing this story. I enjoyed the characters greatly. And I accept your hug via computer screen :)I Remember
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-04
what!? NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!Author's response
I KNOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
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