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Chapter 1: And I Know I Should Be Home
8 reviewsA year after heading to the west coast, tragedy brings Lola back home.
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Addict For Dramatics
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-06
okay let me be the first to say welcome to ficwad. we are crazy people, and you are probably going to get an insane offer from somebody, offering to make babies with you. don't be afraid, it's a compliment. at least i think it is.
anyway, this was very well written. the dialog used was fairly realistic, and i enjoy her sense of humor and overall personality.
oh, and italics is the following (minus the spaces)
< i > insert words that you want italicized here < / i > and if you want bold you do the same thing except substitute a “b” for the “i”
if you have any other questions, you can I.M. me or contact me on here. good luck with the story, although i doubt you'll need it. i'm lovin' it so farAuthor's response
Ah, I knew the italics had something to do with an i and some bracket things, but I forgot exactly how it went. My attempts ended in everything being in italics. Thank you sooo much, I officially owe you my firstborn.Addict For Dramatics
(#) moocow 2006-11-06
ok, i have to.
let's have babies.
hi. i'm evie and i'm going to make you a mommy.Addict For Dramatics
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-06
update right now damn it. hehe.
i love it.
promise.
now write some more.Addict For Dramatics
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-06
hmmm...interesting...so they have a past...can't wait to find out what really happened between them...which is code for update..like now!Addict For Dramatics
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-28
"Because I'm not a four foot, eleven inch, 90 pound girl." -> That scene was a pretty smart move to have her described without it being so obvious that you want the readers to know what she looks like. Smart.
"Pussified". A new word for Alex. Gotta love it.
Yeah... so I´m finally reading this. About goddamn time too.Author's response
Gah! I hate when a story starts off "Hi, my name is______, I have _____ colored hair and _____ colored eyes. I like ____. I hate ______. It's nice to see someone appreciate the fine art of subtlety.Addict For Dramatics
(#) -M- 2007-05-23
I AM OFFICIALLY HOOKED :D
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE OR I WILL DIE :(
YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER BTW :)
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