The path into this heart is littered with corpses and strewn with body parts of those who came before5 reviews
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(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-11I am very impressed by this chapter. I wonder how you were able to set the mood so authentically. (Did some "research", eh? ;) ) I think I´ve just discovered my interest in gay porn. This was really erotic, no lie. There goes my last rating point of the week. :) Oh, and keep it "up" and keep it "coming"... drools
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-12i was nervous to read the infamous "sex" scene i knew would eventually come, thinking most of the vocabulary would consist of "cock" "dick" and "asshole" but i must say...wow
on top of being incredibly erotic, it was surprisingly well written. it wasn't dirty and it seemed genuinely authentic. how much research did it take to write this? now i'm just being dirty...
anyway, this is soooo on my favs list. you two rock
Author's responseWhat is truly amazing is that I (getupngo) wrote this all from my head. I will say I have seen some gay porn (lol), but it was not neccesary in writing this. I think Pete and Ryan deserved to actually make love, and not just have sex, ya know? It was the least I could do.
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