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Taking it up a notch: Footnote this
7 reviewsOk, so a couple of you guys have challenged me...
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The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-17
HAHAHAHA!!!
I love how Andy dismissed her cough that was obviously very unkind and I would never want that to happen to me but I agree with Sheena - WTF?? What's with the whole spazzing out over the head pat thing ( HAHA Head, Pat - get it????)
Anyways sighs
I love you
Ditch Joyce, make Andy gay, Sheena Patrick hook up. End of.
In my defence.
("o)
xxAuthor's response
Yeah, Andy´s a whole lotta fun. Even when he´s not tied up. Where he wanted that drum stick? I guess we´ll never know. I suppose having Sheena tell him that she wasn´t into the sex too much and then tell him that she doesn´t like other things he does kinda made him freak out. But really... I´m just making my way to the end of the story. ;) You I love too. If Andy´s gay does he have to hang out with Pete "Chickenlegs" Wentz? P.S.: Sorry about the AIM thing. Can´t get back online. Piece of junk.The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-17
okay, maybe it's because i'm retarded and/or trying to apply make-up and read at the same time, but i was confused by this whole "footnote" the chapter thing. was it that every time we see the (in any amount, whether it be * or *) we refer back to the first , or is it that the whole chapter = "Reader, the shit hit the fan this time"?
i actually listened to Of All The Gin Joints while reading that, and all i could picture was Patrick. but i'm stump-crazy, so maybe that could be the reason.
"i shit you not" comes in handy a lot more than one would think. like take the following example:
ex. 1.)
Chief: "Crystal, are you using AIM Express at work?"
Me: "No. The fucking thing keeps dying."
Chief: "Really?"
Me: "I shit you not."
actually, the above dialog never really took place, but he did ask me if i was using an instant messenger.
and to completely change the subject – why would andy want to use a drum stick for that? being a drummer, he has hands on experience with those things, and for the most part they seem a little bit...rough. and as a reader i was expecting him to pull out another bag o' goodies. but that's just me.
And to completely change the subject again - do you know what it means when Katy leaves the ("O) thing? I am completely baffled by it.Author's response
Well, basically the whole chapter = the shit hitting the fan (Andy & Sheena fight, Patrick & Joyce trouble). So the firt footnote () and with it the entire chapter that follows the refers to "Reader, the shit it the fan this time.*" Ah, you´re not Stump-CRAZY, silly. You´re Stump-... yeah, what is it?... Huh, huh.... Stump-STRANGE! (75098) Yes. Can´t say I´m surprised you should use "I shit you not." a lot. ;) And I love your use of the English language, btw. I have a serious linguistic crush on you. It is just you. :P I think ("o) means she´s surprised or dumbfounded or something to that extent. But that´s just a guesstimate. Talk to her on AIM. I think our friend´s still on kind of a downer. :(The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) luckysgc921 2006-11-17
blink...Andy's weird...like seriously cracked.
I think I'm jumping on the Patrick love train (and wow what a mental image that can leave you with) even in the alternate universe. Esspecially seeing crazy psycho Joyce in this story.
great chapter. but...Andy's freaky.Author's response
Yeah... well... that´s probably because of his weird diet. (Vegan´s of the world, take me down.) roar I love "the Patrick love train"! Choo-choo, baby! I agree, there´s something seriously wrong with the Hurley genes. Thanks for your r&r! :)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-11-18
Yaya for footnotes!!! Anyways though wtf is up with Andy the guy is schizo in this one I mean good gawd He needs some therapy but thats okay because so do a lot of people. But i still love this story so you have to keep supplying me with my fix of your story.Author's response
Yaya for footnotes it is! Andy does have some weird ideas in bed but, hey don´t we all? (I would like to see Patrick in lederhosen, for instance.) Right. ;) Nothing that I´d rather do. (Except for Patrick in lederhosen.)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) LOVELA 2006-11-19
"Whoa. Frea-KEY."
Ha Ha Ha! I love it!
So here is how it is going to go: Ditch Andy, because in all honesty, he's a definitely going off the deap end. Joyce = Whore. Patrick + Sheena = happy CeCe.
The End.Author's response
You know what? Since you´re so nice I´m just gonna do that. Then again, I´m Asshole Spice so maybe not... ;)The Bass Files: Parallel Universe
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-11-20
Aww, this was slightly depressing.Author's response
Only slightly? Damn... ;)
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