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• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Jimm 2006-11-16

  Now that's a different take on it. :-) Good chapter, thanks for sharing this with us.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) olafr 2006-11-16

  I've never really been a fan of stories about Harry's parents, but this one looks like it's got an interesting twist. I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes - I usually enjoy your stuff, and this one looks to be at least as good as your others.
  
  Technically speaking, this chapter represents a classic 'hook' - anticipation and interest have been built, and I'm well and truly caught. Well done.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Nautilus 2006-11-16

  nice start. will the elder potter now dot on henry, what will do for James.
  
  did you say that Harry - remus - Tonks were lovers. oh well i love good Honks....
  
  sorry to hear abou Hermione, she ended up losing her Loves. One because he was ALWAYS an idiot, and the other because he had little to live for, and had a chance at a better life.
  
  Luna was brilliant as always.
  
  Ron is being an ASS is expected, and accepted with open arms.
  
  well thats its for now.. you realy do have to update ur stories... congrats and update soon.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) selenepotter 2006-11-16

  I love this story, but would rather see Re-Ordered finished first.
  
  As for pairings in this fic: How about Pairing Harry with Luna's Mom.

  Author's response

  Luna's Mum is a Sixth year Ravenclaw in this story, sorry. And this story is finished in rough draft (and is much shorter than Re-Ordered).
  
  "T"

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) matthiasblack 2006-11-16

  Well I enjoyed all of your stories so far in the series and some of your past work even with smut. In short, I enjoy your work and ask you to keep it up. I am eager to see any parryings involved in this timeline and who he tells if anyone about his trip back.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) foolishwandwaver 2006-11-17

  I Like! While time travel is old hat, this has quite the unique spin to it. I am all-a-twitter in anticipation for the next installment.

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  (#) sparky40sw 2006-11-17

  This is quite an interesting start eliminates all the 'ship' wars, as mentioned allows the whole Marauders history to be change, whether by adding Harry/Henry as a 5th, or removing Pettigrew from the picture. Can he find and kill Voldie and then tell the adults the truth and help them reform wizarding society? Lots of possibilities here - Your originality continues to amaze me - thanks for sharing.
  Ken

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) brad 2006-11-17

  I like this start! Several things intrigued me as I read it ... the idea of Ginny being easily imperiused (and proceeding to cripple poor Harry). Don't know if she died because Voldemort actually had her under the Imperius when he left this mortal coil?
  
  Don't know if I like the idea of Harry and Remus sharing Tonks as a lover, but it was still interesting ... and a first for you, I think, H/Tonks?
  
  How come the three children with Hermione on the day of the ritual are named Granger, when Hermione is married to Ron and introduced in the first sentence as having the Weasley surname? I like how you had her still having loved Harry.
  
  I like letting us see how the old timeline ended up rather than shooting us straight into timeline #2.
  
  Amusing treatment of Ron in the aftermath, viz the divorce and his annual whisky toast.
  
  I don't know how I'll find the rest of the story, since it will be dealing with a whole generation removed from Harry and his usual Hogwarts cohorts, but I enjoyed this first chapter, thanks!

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  (#) slasheh 2006-11-18

  great story. i know its getting old, that i praise your work in every single story you write currently, but i truly believe that you write the best time travel stories. Mostly because you stick to a concise plot, instead of just rambling along like so many other authors do.
  This plot is one of the most original works i've seen so far, i hope it continues well.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Dragen 2006-11-28

  What a great and intresting start to the story,I wonder what happened to Harry, so that he only has three years left to live??

  Author's response

  As explained, he was severely injured in the last battle and has been going downhill ever since. In that first chapter, he can only take a few steps on his own unaided.
  
  "T"

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