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Sets of Three, They Say...
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-19
i love mal's character. the nosy sexually charged best friend.
i'm estatic that meg isn't into pete though. she's much more of a patrick kinda gal. i love the line: "...but the whole time, I was sort of wishing I could have been kicking it with Patrick." hells yea
so pete is okay with Patrick escorting Meg home? does that mean he's crushing on Mel?Author's response
WOW.
i'm so good at foreshadowing!
yes. i'm thinking a little mal/pete chemistry might START to take place, but i'm also thinking i loiked the idea of a love triangle. i don't know. decisions, decisions.Sets of Three, They Say...
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-20
You used Spanish, I have to squeeze you now. squuuuuuueeeeeeze YAY!
There was a particular chapter that you executed with such precision I was completely floored, seriously, I would have paid to read a book if it had this in it:
/Lunch with Pete had gone well. Weird well. He was a nice guy, but as Polonius said, brevity is the soul of wit. The most ironic bit about that statement is the way Polonius completely lacks brevity, and wit, consequently.
Pete wasn't quite brevity-less, but not so full of brevity. His habit of dancing around the truth or tip-toeing around the answers to her questions may have been poetic and intelligently cynical to some, but it drove Meg up the wall.
Don't be mistaken. Meg loved the time she spent with Pete. He was funny, and charming and all of the things she'd gathered about him during their first impressions. He just wasn't the type of person deaf people enjoyed trying to communicate with. His sarcasm seemed like rudeness, and his cynicism made the glass seem so sad, and half empty. He'd have to get over that, because she wasn't going to give up on him just yet.
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Genius.
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(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-20
I´m so happy that Meg is more interested in Patrick. I must admit that I do find myself attracted to Pete in this story though. (Not in real-life, no thank you.) It shows that you put a lot of effort into constructing your characters.
I´m hoping to meet Woof very soon...
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