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A Friend Indeed
12 reviewsLogan, Patrick, Joe and Andy plot. Ollie suffers the consequences and Pete becomes enlightened.
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A Chance Acquaintance
(#) killxsmile 2006-11-19
YAY! This is one of this story's that I have bookmarked and am constantly checking. I can't thank you enough for updating.
Ollie and Pete confrontation soon, right?Author's response
Yes indeedy, they will meet in the very next chapter. i would of included it in this chapter but it was long enough and i was about ready to drop by the time id finally published it! Thank you for the review. XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-20
First of all, shame on you for having us kept waiting for so long. ;) Second of all, praise be to you for your latest work! (Erases out the shame and also leaves some extra plus points.)
This was a superb chapter. I love Ollie and Logan´s relationship and also Allie was semi-ok to me. You´re getting extra kudos for picturing Pete on stage like the dumbfound, too-nervous-to-be-cool guy he surely should be from time to time. :)
This is my favorite chapter as of now! :)Author's response
Thank you! I dont feel quite so bad now about leaving you all hanging! I wanted Allie to be a bitch but alas it wasnt to be, i just couldnt make her horrible! I figured that Pete would react that way if he'd been kicking himself for all those months. Poor Petey! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-11-20
You've done it again!!! This chapie is most awesome and all I can say is write more asap because this is one of the best stories on this site so you're doing something right! I loveth this story soo much!!Author's response
Thank you, what you said was so nice! It's reviews like this that make me want to write all the time....unfortunatly my lecturers may have something to say about that! You know you're obsessed when you start writing FF in class right?! O well! Thank you again! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-20
i love the relationship ollie shares with logan, the way you have them communicate and describe the things they've been through together really develops the story.
and i loved how you described Pete seeing Ollie through Patricks point of view. it made it humorous, but also gave us a chance to see how both ollie and pete reacted.
i must admit i am sad, however. only two chapters left... :(Author's response
Thank you! I sometimes feel that i get abit carried away with Ollie and Logan! It is after all supposed to be a Pete/Ollie FF! I cant help it though, something about them makes me want to create a huge past for them! Petes abit of an ass to write to be honest, which is why i tend to write from Patrick's POV. Dont be sad! Logan, Ollie and...well yes lets not give too much away...but yes the next fic that i'm aready writing has many guest apperances! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) duckapple 2006-11-20
yay. I actually squeed aloud when I go the email notice for this.Author's response
Lol! Reviews make me squee so thanks for reviewing! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) riaryder 2006-11-22
Yay! You updated.
I love this story. It's so beautifully descriptive, it's so easy to picture the scene. And the multiple pov's just fill out the story so well. Can't wait for them to meet!!!Author's response
Thank you! The pov's make my head spin sometimes but i like to keep you all on your toes! They will meet next chapter have no fear! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) xloveorsympathy 2006-11-23
Yay an Update !! i eeeed when i saw it i love this story! It awesome how you right descriptions its wow, makes you feel like your there watching it :) if that made sense , sad its coming to an end soon :( keep up the awesome writing!
xxooAuthor's response
Thank you for the review! I'm sad its coming to an end too, but its not really....Links will include everyone from ACA and then some! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) x-xJafax-x 2006-11-26
YAY !! u updated =) i keep checkin bck on ma favs to c u have n u do WOOO !! nehu, i love the discriptions of pete n ollie's reactions it made me laugh
awesome as always n cnt wait for more =)Author's response
Thank you for the review! Hehe, it was so hard to do that whole scene when Pete sees her finally. So im glad you like it! XXA Chance Acquaintance
(#) halleluiakid 2006-12-12
I like this story so far..the ending of this chap was really cute -Author's response
Thank you for reviewing! Much appreciated. Im suffering from severe writers block, reviews are my fuel! XX
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