(#) El_Hustino 2005-07-22I still love it. It's very sad and really touching. It's a good addition to what's shaping up to be YOUR DC section. Think about it, you're basically the founder.
Keep it as a one shot! You're supposed to write for yourself, not for others, and this is wonderful AS-IS.
- you know, i kinda had almost the same story in mind (it was set at night in a playground near ran's house). you beat me to it.
uhm, your story well...didnt have much impact on me. ran was too stubborn and shinichi gave up too quickly.(maybe you should create a..sequel) better luck next time??
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