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September 1
20 reviewsThe Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the train ride and the Sorting.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Toto 2006-11-21
Hehe, just a stupid quick question: Is MCGregore from a more a said named BTVs fanfic writer, or from a more real source?Author's response
Neither, I just needed a Scots surname.
"T"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) smargden_2005 2006-11-21
Thank you for the chapter,
It's nice to keep going into the story as it forms.
As most om the "registring-book's" are "magical" WHO - ? - Is ouer "HARRY" now. "Harry James Potter" or?.
Yes he have taken a new body, he have told Albus who he realy is - hat mening he "identify him self" as WHO?.
OWL's are "seeing" who the mail is adressed to.
But - that is not a key to the story - but things to be taken a thought of - sometimes.
And again - loking forvard to chapter -5-
/BillAuthor's response
Any magical object would see him as Henry John, as that magical signal was modified by Harry's magic, not totally changed by Harry's magic.
"T"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-21
Good update. It was nice to see the lay of the land character-wise. Can't wait for more.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) RedawgTS 2006-11-21
This is certainly much better than Triwizard Redux but Harry is showing a little too much knowledge and power for an eleven year old with amnesia. And I hope you don't do anything creepy with the pairings like have Harry date his mum, start dating too early and he should most definitely not having sex too young. Too common is the problem of Harry falling deeply, madly in love with some (who all too frequently becomes his soul mate) at an early age in time travel fics like this. I really hope you won't fall into that hole.
Even though we've seen next to nothing of Mrs. Potter, from the way she admonished Harry on the platform, I like her already. I have no feelings for Mr. Potter either way right now and I hope you expand their characters a bit later on as I'd like to see more of what they are like.
Overall I think this is a good story so far and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.Author's response
Well, Harry isn't either 11 or an amnesiac, nor a particularly gifted actor, should anyone get suspecious. Harry won't have sexual contact until he's 14, and that if all off camera anyway. As for the soul mate, well. . . .
"T"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) TheIllusiveOne 2006-11-21
Be careful with your Harry's dialoge (speeches), it's very bland having your main character preaching all the time in a story. Other then that, I'm enoying it.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Shaggy37 2006-11-21
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! I am assuming that Sirius, James, Henry(Harry) and Remus were the four boys sorted into Gryffindor? This story keeps getting better every time you update. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Younger Potter Twin
(#) banner 2006-11-21
I wonder - has Riddle cursed the DADA professorship yet? I don't remember that issue being addressed in the books.
Do the centaurs know about Harry?Author's response
Yes, the position is already cursed (it's cursed after Dumbledore turned Riddel down for the job, which would have been in the mid-60s). No, the centaurs don't know.
"T"
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