ok now things go WWWWAAAYYY out of hand.
Really good story! can't wait for the next chapter to see what Neil done to Jay's body!
ooooohhhh. Its hilarious LOL!!!!!. I havnt finshed writing it on Word thing so youll have to wait. Sorry dont Chew my head off.
boy, was that confusing or what! i had to read it slowly and carefully 5 times to get it.
Great chappie, but the last bit was a little confusing, it wasn't confusing until you started on Theresa's pov, just wondering if for future chapters you could continue on like you had before that last bit of chappie 3, all in all it was a funny chappie
Great Story!! A bit confusing, but still good! Update it soon!!
hope you continue! death ring hehe....
That was confusing but hilarious! lol great job!
PLEASE update i love it and i cant wait to find out what happens next
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