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The Sight of Her Tears
1 reviewToph is having horrible nightmares every night.Aang doesn't know what to do.About his true feelings for her or her nightmares.
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Toph's Nightmares
(#) DuskAdo1 2012-11-13
Eh...I'm not at all sure that Xin Fu and Yu would just take his word for ti and walk away. Blah. This needs a bit of work, and check your paragraph spacing. Put a blank line between paragraphs for ease of reading.
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