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Douse the Light
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-11-28
That was amazing.
It actually makes my one-shots look like dirt. Like, seriously.
You can really picture his emotions, and it really gets you in depth with the story without explaining a lot. Well done. Uses rating point =]Author's response
Thank you for such a great comment. I really didn't think that this was very good, it was just because I was feeling like crap one day after school. You have made my day happier. :)Douse the Light
(#) xImRadx 2006-12-11
Holy...Shit...
That was Truly moving. It changed so much. At first I thought they had only broken up. Then when I found out she died (Shocker number one) I thought she was ill. Then It turned around again and you find out she killed herself. (Shocker number two) I was like Wait what!?
It was a very well written story, I could really feel the saddness of Pete and everyone else. You created the mood perfectly...
-Rates her story as moving-
Keep writting, your talented I've read another one of your storys before, and I havent been let down yet.Author's response
i think you're like the nicest person in the world. my writing is total crap. but thank you anyway :) you made my dayDouse the Light
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-11
there are actual tears in my eyes :[
---->rating point!
awww poor poor pete :(
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