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Shame On You
3 reviewsHarry Potter is aware of the wizarding world. The only problem is he grew up apart from it. When he explored the magical world, he found danger, wonder, and friendship.
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Second Fiddle
(#) Nautilus 2006-12-02
finally an update, i really did hope to see Harry save their asses again, but this looks good so far. i wouldn't mind a ripped up and dead Serverus.
i am hoping that tonks will be okay, i love tonks, i still hope that you make this a honks, but its doubtfulll anyway, update soon.Author's response
Update kinda took longer, sorry. More Snape in later chapters. I'll keep Honks in mind.Second Fiddle
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-02
Interesting update. As usual, my dislike for Ron continues to grow by leaps and bounds.
The only thing that bothered me about this chapter was the lack of Harry, but I think the Voldemort scene at the end made up for it.Author's response
Harry will appear in later chapter.Second Fiddle
(#) Skoell 2006-12-02
good that there is a new chapter! feared the worst...=P
great chapter, but i miss harry as an active part...
i hope that tonks, ms bones and lily stay alive! they are intersting and good characters...it's a shame rowling killed bones off between book 5 and the (unspeakable(=P)) book 6...
maybe hermione visits harry when snape suprises lily and she rescues her...
well, we will see.....hopefully soon...=)Author's response
Sorry for a very late update. The next chapters hopefully answer some of your questions.Second Fiddle
(#) Anaknisatanas 2006-12-02
I do hope that Mrs. Potter gets the warning in time. I hope also that Harry kicks Snape's ass! He deserves it! Still, I feel kinda bad for Susan and Amelia Bones. Glad you updated, I hope you update again this month.Author's response
Kinda late in responding this review also. Mrs. Potter did receive a warning. More Snape, Susan and Madam Bones in later chapters.Second Fiddle
(#) Toto 2006-12-02
Pretty good, though your ron and neville bashing can be a bit thick at times...Author's response
It'll get better.Second Fiddle
(#) Alatoic01 2006-12-02
Nice chapter,
Its seems that Dumbledore is going to recive a lesson in estrategy.
I wonder if Voldemort is going to not only make an ambush th the Order(just for fun) and in the meantime atack Hogwarts to get Harry?.
Also I hope Snape get cought, he have been doblecroosing to long.
Will Hermione confront her feelings for Harry soon? its obvious what she feel and the sooner she stand for it the better and with that stop the prats of Ron and Neville atacking Harry always.
Hope to read next update soon.
Cheers.
MACAuthor's response
The next chapters will answer some of your questions, I hope. There will be confrontation of feelings later, just thinking of a creative way to present it.Second Fiddle
(#) c3markh 2006-12-03
Love the story. Thanks for writing.Author's response
Thanks. Hope you keep reading it.Second Fiddle
(#) alec_potter 2006-12-06
good chapter...well hopefully next one will come out sooner...and snape comes to a 'greasy' end...acnt wat for that.
am diappointed in nevilie...but guess fame can do that to a person...hopefully harry makes more friends..and hermione gets together with him soon.
keep updating.Author's response
There will be more of Snape in later chapters. I hope the next chapters will shed light on Harry's social and romantic life.
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