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Olivia has questions - does Peter have answers?
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Not Looking
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-03
Ha, I'm too tired to leave a good review. But I'm anticipating the drama that must inevitably follow this twist.
Have a rating point. 'Tis my last. Roll around Monday, for I have stuff to read, review and rate!
I loved it! :)Author's response
You know it. My mamma wanted to called me Drama....Not Looking
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-03
haha yeah the little hairs stood up! haha. great update! i cant wait to find out who olivia ends up with!Not Looking
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-03
why does pete have to ruin what the biscuit has going for him? what a trouble maker. we should kidnap him. hehe.
this was a pretty revealing chapter. that's some big news, lady.
i'm hoping it will work itself out. i always hope the nice guy finishes first.Author's response
I know, he's such a biscuit stealer. I found it a hard chapter to write, I actually want people to feel sorry for Pete....yeah. Figure it out. We're hard core biscuit lovers. It's never gonna happen.Not Looking
(#) duckapple 2006-12-03
Feel better baby moose (thats what I saw the first time I read over blows nose. Perhaps I shouldn't read when I first get home from work.) And good job on the story. I love it almost as much as I love you.Author's response
nudges you with her antlers.... thanks schweetie, I love you as well as all of DoJ, check out our website to see why! lol ( http://divisionofjoy.blogspot.com/ ) Shameless plug, good job I have no pride....Not Looking
(#) Angelicgypsy89 2006-12-03
Holy Crap!!! You totally flipped the script...and...I'M LOVING EVERY FREAKIN' MINUTE OF IT!!! The drama of it all. can't wait until u finish the next chapter. Peace..Author's response
Yay - I invoked CAPS! how exciting! Thanks for reading. :)Not Looking
(#) LOVELA 2006-12-04
So here are my thoughts as I read this.
"What the hell is going on!? What the hell is his PROBLEM!? I don't get it...(shocker)." Then it all hit me and I was like "ohhhhhhhh. Well, that's just....holy crap...this girl sure is creative."
I envy your writing in this story and I want to orb into you and write my update, so it is as orignal and wonderful as this story. Unfotunately, I don't have that super power. Don't you wish sometimes that you were in a group of seven girls who each had their own super powers? Wait, what?Author's response
I was slightly aroused by your review.....Not Looking
(#) riaryder 2006-12-13
You just keep outdoing yourself with every new chapter. Dramarama.
Ah, poor Patrick. Ah, poor Pete. I just don't know anymore!!
Spectacular, girl!Not Looking
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-10
I like your message to your virus. Cute. Not the virus, the message.
And I'm getting tired of people leaving Patrick for Pete. Stupid Pete, taking all the ladies. How can you say no to those sideburns?!
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