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Hinata surprises all
3 reviewsHinata acts super weird today...it is always the quiet ones that get you... actually this is one weird day
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Big Bad Hinata and some more weird suff
(#) road 2007-12-08
dude great story i thought it was funy.keep it up
Big Bad Hinata and some more weird suff
(#) Mairead 2008-11-10
You might want to think about capitalizing your I's, and learning more about how to use commas. It'll make you a better writer.
It seems like you're having fun writing this-- go you.
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