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• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) slaphanson 2006-12-04

  Wow, I have to say this is one of your the better chapters of this story, the last scene is brilliant I really can't wait to see how Harry gets out this fine situation with out getting in to much trouble. It's nice to see Harry growing up and noticing that the world is not black and white. Keep up the good work and update this story soon I can't wait.
  
  Sorry I know that your not going to updates just because I say so I'm happy to wait until the next update.

  Author's response

  Working on chapter 16 now.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) ursis001 2006-12-04

  Hi,
  I just wanted to rise from lurking to say your story "Bungle In The Jungle" is now one of my favorite HP fanfics.
  Thanks, ursis001

  Author's response

  Thanks. I am starting on chapter 16 today!~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-04

  Absolutely brilliant! I never would've seen Paulo's betrayal coming, at least not in that direction. I assumed he wanted Karina for himself, which is what you probably wanted your readers to think. Very well done.
  
  PLEASE update this one in a hurry! I can't help but look forward to seeing more.

  Author's response

  I probably could have dropped a few more hints, but I wanted you the reader to be as blindsided as Harry was. He never saw it coming. Chapter 16 starts today.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) JVTazz 2006-12-04

  bah you and your lovely little cliffies mutter good chapter looking forwrd to the next though :)

  Author's response

  Cliffhangers are great. Who doesn't love a good cliffhanger. Starting chapter 16 today~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) DrT 2006-12-05

  Not sure where you're going with 'Loony', and let's hope Harry gets out of this mess. I guess that depends on if the Don considers Harry a loose end or not.
  
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  "T"

  Author's response

  Neither Harry nor Luna are very good with relationships. Luan hides behind Looney and Harry hides behind angry brooding. It's a volatile combo.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) foolishwandwaver 2006-12-05

  Well now THAT was a surprise ending for the chapter. Never seen that coming. I do agree with Harry getting a bit miffed with Looney instead of Luna. I mean who wants to figure out Looney when your recovering from a Korean hit-wizard style 'lesson' and have everything else going on that he does?
  It would be wise for Harry to explain that Luna is for now while Looney is for lazy Sunday afternoons with nothing much going on. But that is only my opinion for what it's worth.
  Question... will you keep going with this story, or does it end at the beginning?

  Author's response

  Neither Harry nor Luna are good with relationships. It'll boil over in this chapter. The story ends with Harry preparing to return to England. The sequel picks up there.~Jim

• Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

  (#) JustAReader 2006-12-16

  good fic nice and original. Mean little cliffy there too. Please post more soon.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I see you have already reviewed chapter 16. Hope you have a Merry XMas.~Jim

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