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Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-05
Just genius! I must admit, I have to re-read it a lot because is your style is so new and not one I'm used but it DOES NOT mean I don't absolutely love it!
It's a fresh perspective and it's great writing.
So is Jess getting cozy with Tricks? ....interesting...Cobwebs On My Zipper
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-06
i'm sorry i haven't reviewed yet. let me take this opportunity to tell you i think your writing style is superb. like katy said, it's original and refreshing. she's going to punch me later for not reading this sooner.
i think the way you write the interaction between the members of the band is very realistic, but one thing i don't understand is how pete hasn't met melissa yet, being that she's andy's sister. maybe i missed something.
when i first read this i thought their would be a connection between pete and jess, but looking back on it now she's perfect for patrick. she's a little bit on the shy side, but for the most part she has an amazing personality. on top of that, she has passion for what she does. you wrote her character VERY well. i love her.
now, surely melissa can't be perfect. maybe it's just in pete's eyes. i dunno.
anyway, i'm giving you a rating point because you rock. keep it upCobwebs On My Zipper
(#) scarrlifigous 2007-04-01
Ah, don'tcha hate question markes based off that confusing little thing we call...
THE OPPOSITE GENDER.
Dun dun dun...
Fabulous update, m'Dear. Just a few things I can't get enough off:
-These CHARACTERS! Seriously, they're entirley original but after just a chapter you feel completley connected to them. n.n
-The relationships. Patrick and Jess seem like they would make a cute couple, and for once it seems like Pete is the 'nervous, trmebling, stuttering' one instead of Patrick. I love the twist.
-The plot. Action! (Not just suspenseful but Joe too ;]) The way it keeps in rhythym.
-The descriptions. You have a different perspective of things, which it entirley a good thing, by the way.
Yes this is a long review but truthfully, this is the best 'piece of shit' I've read in a long time. Officially my favorite story. n.n
~Sabbs
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