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Chapter one
8 reviewsA French exchange goes to Megs school and is staying with the Griffins.
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Brigitte: the French exchange student
(#) Camera_Doesnt_Lie 2006-08-14
Three things.
1) Paragraphs. Learn to love them.
2) You don't need to spell out where a flashback begins and ends. The readers are smart. They'll figure it out with a subtler demarkation.
3) The cute little French hat is called a 'beret'.Brigitte: the French exchange student
(#) greektitan 2006-09-25
It was good but short and i didnt get the ending and french hat(aka beret)o yea it was ok but it would be better if you entered the nice world of longer chapters and more paragrphs.Not to be afencive or anything just some advice,tataBrigitte: the French exchange student
(#) HakuRules1424 2006-11-15
what the heck.....GreekTitan and Cemera Doesnt Lie, where do you get off remarking this person's story like that.....anyway i thought it was really good and you should write more....Brigitte: the French exchange student
(#) Popciclegirl 2006-11-22
LOL! I like it..A LOT! next chapter...PLEASE?
Elena(is HOOKED)
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