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I think I need a sunrise, I'm tired of sunsets.
3 reviewsMaybe another update later today too... Note. The strange boy is fictional. :] FYI; starting to write final chapter, because I like how it's gonna ennnnnnd. Maybe a sequel to it? Depends on i...
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Let's Spend Tonight on Top of the World
(#) kissxthexbullet 2006-12-10
Well shit.
I can be quite seductive myself.
...Maybe I can get you to update again?
RAWR.Let's Spend Tonight on Top of the World
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-11
Geeeez, you’re shooting out new chapters like no tomorrow. ;) Ah, I don’t mind but it might take a while for me to catch up.
/ A gorgeous creepy dude who was going to kidnap me and force himself into my pants.
I smiled back and let out a little giggle. "Of course you can," I responded, moving closer to him. I stood in front of him, my back facing him, and I felt his warm hands hit my hips through the thin shirt. Me-OW./ -> This probably just me being Alex but I found this hialrious. ;)
I snuck a peek across the room at the bar counter. All four boys were staring back me, perplexed looks crossing all of their faces--except Pete's, which contained pure anger. -> Poor Pete. Not. :I
This boy was all of charming, and drop dead seductive. -> Oh yeah. You can say that again.
Take the rating point and write more.Let's Spend Tonight on Top of the World
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-12
A gorgeous creepy dude who was going to kidnap me and force himself into my pants.
You get the rating point for that - classic.
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