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• Untitled

  (#) darks00 2006-12-10

  Good thing Julius can't hear that. He'd kill the guy! Guess she can't blow her cover off, though, huh? Very good, please update soon! rates exciting
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

• Untitled

  (#) gucci84 2006-12-12

  Ouu Delilah telling a guy off is pretty awesome! You tell that rich jerk boy he's not worthy! Woot!
  
  I like how your chapters are longer now. I was a bit confused about their mission. Maybe more details about it as their thoughts would clarify it? I dunno, just a suggestion. Don't listen to me, I can barely finish my own story.
  
  Anyhow, good story. Keep up the good work, we're all waiting for an update.

• Untitled

  (#) vaiwandil 2006-12-15

  yeah! well done, delilah!
  very interesting story so far and this carl-guy is very well characterized in these few paragraphs.
  can't wait to find out more!

• Untitled

  (#) Trinda 2006-12-15

  Ha, too funny. Carl was depicted perfectly as the guy who think's he's all that. Wooh! Go Delilah! Tell that sleeze-bag off. ;)

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