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Chapter Three: Gotta Love the Invincible Armor
9 reviewsA little more lovie-dovie... *wink*
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The Mistake
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-14
aw. she lost his phone number? that sucks. i would keep it in my hand the ENTIRE time. seriously. never let go. and never surrender. wait... lol cant wait for another update!Author's response
HAHA, me too w/ the number... Ava is just a little frazzled right now...The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14
A lovely chapter (hence, the rating point).
Despite all it's bad luck-yness and the sadness I found it quite humorous at points. I have a supsicion that this was intentional (e.g. the underwear thing) but if it happened by chance, don't be offended. I find humor in the weirdest kind of places (e.g. my own head).
Whenever I reach the bottom of a page I wonder what the plonk will happen next???Author's response
No, the humor is not by chance, I kind-of want the sadness to have some funny elements, or else who would want to read it? The underwear thing will prob. come into play later as long as I don't change my mind. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!The Mistake
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-15
yay! atleast wendy's alive!!
ahh! how could she lose his #!!!!
i would pretty much die if i got his # and then lost it!!! for sure
update again soon!!The Mistake
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-15
yay! atleast wendy's alive!!
ahh! how could she lose his #!!!!
i would pretty much die if i got his # and then lost it!!! for sure
update again soon!!The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-17
Patrick IS teddy bear, he is the EPITOMY of teddy bear and Ava is the EPITOMY of romance.
I loved it. I really did! (",)Author's response
You are the EPITOMY of amazing!The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-11
so yes,
this is an amzing story.
you are an amazing writer.
but you already know that i thought that.
reguardless,
you win for today and possibly tomorrow, and maybe for the rest of my life.Author's response
It makes me so happy that you think my story is amazing!!! And You're making my blush with the 'amazing writer' bit. All your amazing reviews make my life, but YOU already know THAT... Reguardless, I think YOU win, because your stories are just that fantastic.The Mistake
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
This was too sweet. I laughed when she thought about how comfortable he was. I bet he is.
Nothing bad can happen as long as you don't let it. But this time that wasn't the case; Wendy had left her invincible armor at home, and in doing so, put a chink in Ava's. This line really stuck with me. I thought it was well-written and it really showed how Ava was falling apart, without actually saying that Ava was falling apart.
Love love love.
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