(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-16First off all, that chapter has one of the coolest titles ever! :)
Things I dug the most:
- Trick saying that he learned faking happiness from the best, a.k.a. Pete. Seems pretty authentic to me.
- The whole chapter is convincing and honest. Despite the danger of just following a typical cliché (young men fear becoming dads because they think it will ruin their lives), you perfectly managed just to avoid that. It was new and refreshing. :)
If I wasn't fully convinced that our babies will have my fucked-up DNA in regards to hair, I'd offer producing some with you...
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-17stump bump
Get rid of your hareem of woman, get a bottle of wine and get over to bedroom right now. We have babies to make.
You're carrying. I have a weak bladder.
Plus, the incubation will give you plenty of time to write an update.
have a rating point,enjoy. xxx
Author's responseThere was supposed to be a footnote, but I always forget to add them. But yes, I'll carry as long as you do the changing and breast feeding.
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