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Chapter 11: No-one's going to take me Alive, we all must fight to survive.
9 reviewsFriendship is everything, Love is all we have.
5Exciting
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Not Looking
(#) duckapple 2006-12-18
I love you.
I do.
Babies?
PS: Its hard to type when half of your hand falls asleep.Author's response
I need you hands to make my babies, wait, no I don't - continue....Not Looking
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-18
I may not be the first to review, but I was the first to drop a rating point. Boo and yah! Anyway, let me just start off by saying I love your little references to the DoJ girls. I think one was Sarah, with the set of threes thing, and then I think you mentioned division of joy...it made me smile.
Secondly, wow. Just wow. When Pete and Olivia were going at it, my face= :O I had thought she gave in, since "they" were pretty much forcing it to happen. But that was her scam, right? To make "them" and Pete realize how wrong it was to hurt poor Patty-Cakes like that.
I'm a little torn about O being relieved of her gift. I mean, she's had it all her life. Now she won't be able to track back if something goes horribly wrong, which I know it will. But now she can be with Patrick and not have her thoughts tainted with Peter. But I have a feeling "they're" not quite done with her just yet. Excellent chapter, my dear.Author's response
What a great review, have I told you how cute you are lately? xxxNot Looking
(#) riaryder 2006-12-18
Spectacular chapter. A turn-up I didn't expect. But I've got a fore-boding feeling. Your going to make her regret that aren't you? Cannot wait to see what happens next. Have a point!Author's response
thank you for my point tucks it in pocket Regret is a killer y'know....Not Looking
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-18
She grunted? Has Olivia been hanging out with Crystal? If so, I’m jealous! I haven’t talked to Crystal in forever… :(
Ha! “In sets of three, they say.” & “division of joy” -> There’s no better way to show DoJ love than that, Katy. :) Plonk-worthy.
Sorry, you misspelled “colors” there…
Sweet mother of Plonk. The contradictoriness (how badly did I just rape the English language?) of the making out/ sex scene was breath-taking. I love you, Katy.
“Neither, when you get it, is it always a satisfaction that you can live with.” -> Tru dat.
They say: Give her a rating point, Alex. You know you have no other choice.
Since I’m not as brave as Olivia, I will comply…
You’re doing something very brave and new, Katy. Glad you’re my wife. (And personal back scratcher…)Author's response
I seriously think Olivia has been hanging out with Crystal, I mean where the hell is she. Personally I think she cussed and blew her laptop up but who knows??
Thank you for my review Alex. xNot Looking
(#) ZippersOverYou 2006-12-18
oh clutches artery dear lord that was beautiful....absolutely positively undoubtably undubidibly without a doubt freakishly wonderfully sweetly amazing, Thank you for brighting my life with this story...wow.Author's response
was that the pulmonary artery, the aortic artery or the carotid?? out of interest.......Not Looking
(#) LOVELA 2006-12-18
I actually gasped out loud while reading this story, which made me glad I was in the solitary of my own home and not a public coffee house. Even though yelling at the people would be fun again, but I was told if I start a riot again, I can never drink their coffee again. I couldn't let that happen!!! SO, again you amaze me. I am so excited to find out what is going to happen because I have this feeling in the pit of my stomach (or I am getting sick again) that it is going to be drama filled. Just the way I like it. You are wonderful in all ways, shapes and forms!Author's response
There's a lot of gut feelings happening.....hoping I'm not heading for a predictable rating......meh....Not Looking
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-19
yay!
she gets to be with patty-cakes! haha
i love it so much! update again soon!
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