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Loves Punishment
(#) riaryder 2006-12-20
Hey, it's brilliant! Have confidence woman :-) And update. The suspense is killing me!Author's response
Thank you for being so sweet! Updates after x-mas! Stay tuned!Loves Punishment
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-21
Oh you can just shush immediatley because this was a stunning chapter. I was so invovled, you chapter didn't want to make me flick my eyes down to see what happens, because the sense of rhtyhm and the pace of the chapter was just right.
Tha ambiance was good to, and all the mannerisms, the crying, the words, they were very very powerful.
You rock!
Be Rated!!Author's response
Great review! Be thanked!Loves Punishment
(#) duckapple 2006-12-22
Best two last lines ever.
Babies.
Now.Author's response
Thank you! Name the time and place. I'll wear something pretty! :)Loves Punishment
(#) fob4ever 2007-02-02
ok so i just read that whole story deal in one sitting. i couldnt stop! it was crazy. Pete being dead made me sad, even though he cheated. :(
i need to know how it ends!!!
great writing.Author's response
Yay for a new READER! I am working on an update as we speak. Check back soon.
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