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• Have a Little Time

  (#) the-Ordinary 2007-01-07

  Praise: The characters weren't OOC at all. Sokka going to a university is a far stretched concept, but a nice touch. I adored Toph's line, "...And tea just ins't that interesting"
  
  Critisicm: There's a grammatical error in the first line, and people are raising their eyebrows too much. There are other ways to convey emotion and expression.
  
  Overall, an enjoyable read. Thanks for posting it.

  Author's response

  Thanks! I really am enamored with the idea of Sokka going to a university. The show toys with him being an intellect (such as during The Mechanic) and I really like that aspect of his personality.
  
  I have a horrible habit of using repetitious language. Thanks for the concrit! I'll try and keep it in mind as I write. :)

• Have a Little Time

  (#) Zoey_was_here 2007-02-10

  I thought that was a great story. Great job!

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