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• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) AshleyChaotic 2006-12-29

  fucking evie. that was low.
  even for fucktard pete.
  i still love it though.
  you now officially own my writing hand.

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-29

  EGHHH.
  Pete just spilled his freaking guts out, and thats all you have to say?
  HA.
  I bet that annoyed him.
  Poor Panda.
  Well at least it's exciting to try and guess where its going.
  I love Evie+Ashley Stories.

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2006-12-29

  one word, well not even a word : "awh"... you wernt wrong i am pretty close to crying!

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) sing4me09 2006-12-29

  no...no dead ends!
  
  YOU TWO ARE MEANT FOR EACHOTHER!!!
  
  am I like the only one who sees it!?

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) xxlaurenxx 2006-12-29

  even though pete just spilled his gutts out and cried and spoke every word that was on his mind, i can understand why evie can't take him back.
  
  she keeps giving him chances and he keeps screwing things up. i mean sometimes enough is enough.
  
  but i luv this story, every chapter is exciting. update soon or else :D

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-30

  I'd probably be playing around with other girls' minds, bodies, and hearts. Then pull my great disappearing act, hoping I never run into them again. I'd be a grade A smooth talker, also known as, a player, manwhore, douche, and pretty much anything other word created that I could degrade myself with. -> The emotions. Gah. Exquisit.
  
  But every time I tried to move on, it just made me want to go back to her more. Some part of me still believed that even though she could find better and do better with out me, I was the one that was meant to hold her and tell her everything is going to be okay. She was the one that was designed to fit in this bed with me. We put the us in jealous, etcetera, etcetera. -> I know someone who feels like that. He could have said that. Excellent, moomoo.
  
  "I'm awkward," he started and poked my chest. "You're just stupid," I rolled my eyes and stood to walk him out. -> That’s why we love Hat Rack.
  
  /"Ya gonna give 'em to her or are you saving them for ya'lls wedding?" I blinked myself back to earth and held out the flowers.
  +
  "And remember, no glove, no love," Travis paused for a second, "well...maybe it's too late for that." Patrick punched him in the arm and rolled his eyes./ -> Those lines make me want to pay more attention to GCH’s music. You’re a goof-cow, Evie.
  
  I had to rate this chapter “moving” because… it is.
  The humor, the drama. I couldn’t ask for more. (Well, I guess my spaghetti would have to be with meatballs.)
  
  This is such a good story, it’s killer.

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-01-02

  I loved this chapter for the first and last lines. Perfecto muchas.

• I Could Be Taking You There With Me

  (#) nya-MEya 2007-03-18

  Ahh.
  
  My best friend fell asleep in my living room watching Tv and Im up here on the computer.But this made my day.
  
  :]. At 2:ooam.
  
  AND I was a good girl today.Instead of a hamburger I had some nice healthy candy.
  
  Fun.

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