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The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) riaryder 2006-12-30
I could rate this funny because Ella and Patrick's interaction with each other really makes me smile. But it's kind of exciting and a little sad too. And a scone baby? That is just too cute.I want THIS Patrick to be MY boyfriend. Can you work that out for me? Thanks. I'll give you a oint if you do........hahaAuthor's response
I always wanted an Oint! Isn't that a penny sweet?????The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) riaryder 2006-12-30
Or maybe I will give you a point. Oint's are over-rated. :-)The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-30
Another ratey point for Katy.
I really like this story.
It's so original, and moving.
Update soon. And I will. Ha.
=]The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) LOVELA 2006-12-30
"Y'know we should just try once more cos y'know, I just wanna make sure I got it right because I wasn't sure I did it right the first time..." Patrick whispered, she giggled and rolled on to him.
That was great! I love this story so much!
MISS YOU LIKE CRAZY!The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-30
“Likewise.” -> Remember AIM? (Just say yes, even if you don’t. Or I’ll feel like a moron. ;) Even more than usual.)
“bovine” -> I love you. Katy. :) Forever und einen Tag.
The kid thing caught me off-guard. Nice job.
“those jerks” -> Loving it!
Bye bye, r point.
I think this is your best story. I also think this is one of the best stories on ficwad. I think I am right.
Kudos to you for producing such fine fiction under the real time pressure. You are one amazing non-bovine. DoJhuggageAuthor's response
I'm Sad.The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01
"Credit given where credit is due my biscuit" - doesn't Pete know that "the biscuit" is a term trademarked by Katy Inc. and not to be used without permission from Katy Inc. or it's distributors (namely the DoJ, when given permission from Katy Inc.). we should sue that sonofabitch.
and i miss you. dammit. get on AIM. how dare you have a life on New Years Day? poutsThe Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) MMMramen 2007-01-05
A tall balding man came, he had the kindest face and he looked young for his age. His fingers were plump but they looked like they give great hugs and his eyes were the kind that just looked into your soul and kissed it better. I don’t know why, but your description made me smile.
/"I really didn't think it was for Ella, yanno...kids, babies, nappies...." Joe said, Patrick felt a little uncomfortable.
"People change Joe." He said softly.
"I guess they do." He smiled back. / I’m glad that Joe is taking this well. Many ex boyfriends tend to…overreact…but he’s being very cordial about the situation.
/"So that's good!" She chirped and wrapped it up in tissue paper, throwing it in the bin.
"Yeah!" Patrick agreed, watching her as she pulled both sides of her hair behind her ears, she nodded quickly and forced the smile. / I thought they were trying for a baby…? I’m kind of getting the feeling that maybe she’s not so sure. Maybe it has something to do with her own mother’s death…or perhaps I’m reading far too into this.
She began writing, starting with the Bass Clef I thought this was a really big deal…she’s been so reluctant to be involved with music and here she is, starting to write a piece. I’m very proud of her.
"Y'know we should just try once more cos y'know, I just wanna make sure I got it right because I wasn't sure I did it right the first time..." Patrick whispered, she giggled and rolled on to him. Patrick is so cute in a perverted sort of way.
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