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• Potestatem obscuri lateris nescis

  (#) dsfjr1190 2006-12-30

  Good start. I'll continue with this story. I'll stop if Harry is in a slash pairing.

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  (#) Cateagle 2006-12-30

  Interesting concept and I'll be most interested in seeing how you develop it. I suspect you're correct, we likely don't/won't see eye to eye on 'most anything, politically, since I'm of a fairly libertarian bent that way and feel that a peoples' freedom is up to them, not a government nor some special person. I most definitely fault the Ministry and the magical educational establishment for making British wizards serfs in their minds when they have the ability to be free citizens; someone ever starts pointing that out, the Ministry is goign to brand them as dark so fast your head would spin.

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  (#) snowman 2006-12-31

  good story so far.

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  (#) killerlord 2006-12-31

  grerath fic i really like the beginning i hope you will update soon

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  (#) MaD_hAtTer 2006-12-31

  For me anything with elves sounds wonderful to me ^^ and this fic is no different. I hope to hear more. I would like to help you but English just seems to hate me and god has given me no talent in the fine art of literature ^^;;

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  (#) unstopping-pain247 2006-12-31

  Very nicely done, (though i'm a still icky towards the hole mpreg thing, since i'm assuming that's how harry was conceived). I don't really see your problem with dialog, it seemed fine to me, unless it took you hours upon hours to come up with that, which i doubt. I see a lot of potential in this fit and it interests me greatly. I hope you update soon, but at your own pace is best. I'd like to offer my help in any way i can, though i am very busy too, but still, if there's anything you need, don't hesitate to ask. Personally, i love action/fighting scenes the most ^_^ (speaking of which, i wonder if you'll be using a different magic system from lotr world to teach/help harry?)
  
  Ne ways, great story, and i hope to read more soon.
  
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  (#) jabarber69 2006-12-31

  Interesting story I hope you can continue it!

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  (#) killerlord 2007-01-01

  greath story please update soon

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  (#) Shaggy37 2007-01-01

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I mean talk about meeting your parents. I still can't believe Legolas and Sauron had kids but I like it. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

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  (#) shellz1388 2007-01-02

  This looks pretty good so far. IMO, I'd rather see shitty dialouge than nothing at all, although I'm sure you aren't as bad as you think. I'm sure I'll be confused, because I never got into the LoTR series, but it looks promising at the moment.

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