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Independence Day
(#) DrT 2007-01-06
The Hestia Jones touch was brilliant! Will it turn out to be her idea or someone else's? Hilarious!
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(#) Dragen 2007-01-06
What another great and insightful chapter, the cause of all the misery in his life, is himself, not Harry, not his family, but him...
I like the defferent PoV, of Vernon, Petunia and Dudley.
Vernon is truly is a fool, talking to the Police about magic, as the Police does not know anythinig about the Wizarding World.
At long last, Vernon, Petunia and Dudley are getting what disove.Independence Day
(#) matthiasblack 2007-01-06
Interesting chill chapter and I can't wait to see the next installment of Independence Day.Independence Day
(#) Skoell 2007-01-06
wow....first time i could rate this story because all the other times, it was already rated too good....
love it that you write about what happens besides the main plot! i just completes the story with funny and full details!
especially vernon is great written!
maybe hestia is a bit too mean, but she is also an unknown quantity in canon, and the fact that this is fanfiction makes it as well as could be reasonable use of an character...and further torment of the dursleys....Independence Day
(#) Alorkin 2007-01-06
Well, it looks like the Dursleys are having a REALLY bad day. I used to be a police oficer, (among several other duties) and your arrest scene was well done. I don't know if the Brits have the same righs as ours (Miranda-v-the State of Arizona, 1964), but you sounded good!
Looks like ol' Vern's day ain't gettin' any better. Hmmmmm! Bribery? That ought to be good for something.
It's interesting how the constable terminated thhe interview. Very clean, that.
Time to call in the duty shrink, mmmm?
Dudley is a bully and should have been dealt with long before this. With all the charges, I wonder how (or if) Dumbles is gonna handle this? Likely Moody will sit back and have a chuckle.
I hadn't considered Jones. They're taking over....
This ain't gonna be good for the Dursley slush fund. I reckon that by the time this is done, their savings will have completely dried up. Couldn't have happened to a nicer bunch of folks. Heh heh heh!
Y'know...A large and visible corporation like Grunnings, wouldn't appreciate the negativee publicity that Vernon's arrest would generate. That and the 'sudden, unexplained departure'
of his secretary(ies?) would lead to closer investigation. I'm sure that couldn't be too good for business...
As before, I eagerly await the next page of 'Independence Day'.
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(#) DavidMPotter 2007-01-06
I have read and reviewed else where. I can't wait until the new material is posted.
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