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The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) patrickdance4me 2007-01-06
loved it all the way through! very nicely written.The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) LOVELA 2007-01-06
This was a perfect ending chapter to a perfect story! I wish I could say more, but my brain is foggy and I am more than likely not making much sense. O'well.
I loved it. 'Nough said.
You rock my world in more ways than one.The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) riaryder 2007-01-07
Perfect ending to a magnificent story. Loved it. All of it. And well done for delivering it in such a short period of time.The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-07
Staring at your freshly painted nails and commenting them with “perfect” kind of makes me classify you as a possible “psycho”. Good job, Katy. ;)
"Ugh....you wonder why women won't move in with you??" He asked, raising his eyebrows. -> Cos he’s not Patrick?
“hugged the man way” -> Ha ha. Cute.
/"You've just gotta know what you want Pete." He said intelligently. Pete put his knife and fork down.
"Yeah....." He said thoughtfully./ -> I found this really comedic. Is that alright with you? ;)
Wonderful supsense-creating by inserting that flashback section. On the edge of my seat. And now, on the floor.
Patrick’s wedding vow is… perfect. :)
Ha, love to read how “This ain’t a scene” REALLY came about.
I’m rating this “moving”. For the whole story and for the final author’s note.
Mighty proud of ya, DoJ sister, wife and real friend. international huggageThe Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) x-xJafax-x 2007-01-13
I wanna say sorry for not reviewing the other chapter this one, I just wanted to finish this before I get kicked off. Anyway, This story was so moving and interesting, I was hanging off every word ..... amazing story, thanks for writing this, I throughly enjoyed.
Mucho Love
Me x
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