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14. You Make A Promise, Stand Right By Your Words
4 reviewsin which the fall out from Molly's decision hits everyone involved. and hits them hard.
3Ambiance
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-06
wow.
i just found this story and read the whole thing.
its amazning i love it!
you have an amaing talent :)
i love how your writing Molly
i love the polt :)
keep it up! cant wait for a update ;)Author's response
yay for new readers!
thanks for the praise. I'm glas you're enjoying the story so far. I'm gonna be updating hopefully within the next 24 hours since I don't have to work tomorrow I get to stay up super late and write.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) getup_n_go 2007-01-06
holy geebus
update now, woman!
i dont care if you are at work
update with your mind!Author's response
oh yea doll face, right in between running videos and ringing up the saturday night crowd.
"uhh..Joe. yea I need to go use the office computer."
"Why?"
"wellllllllll...."
lol. :)
love you.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-01-06
I love you more than I thought I did.
BTE are my local boys.
Update.
And please don't kill the girl.
Its not nice.Author's response
i heart BTE. :) "Friction, Baby" was one of my favorite albums when I was in junior high (yup--I'm that damned old).
Look for Despretely Wanting to show up in Chapter 17.
I'm working on an update right after I finish typing this.
and don't worry. Molly isn't dead. 'cause then the story would be kaput.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-08
Patrick telling Molly to grow up is slightly ironic.
I loved the creating of suspense that was brought about by not telling the reader right away what objects Molly took. Ok, maybe it was kinda obvious for a person with a brain. Anways, I felt the suspense. :)
Ambiance.Author's response
yea. I was writing that and I said to myself "what would his reaction be? he's 16 and male. Ok he'd be not understanding and pissed off."
And yea, I tried to create suspense glad I managed it.
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