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15. Intent's Not As Bad As The Action
5 reviewsin which we enter into Sean's head for a brief change of pace.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-01-07
You're evil.
But I like it.
:)Author's response
bwahahahahahahahahahaa! cough errrr, no? lol.
Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-07
oh gee.
exicting, but sad at the same time.
gives you a weird feeling inside
:)Author's response
yup. glad you liked that chapter. I was trying to portray a bit of an "uncomfortable" feeling with it. it's not supposed to be an easy topic.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-07
this story is so great. it makes me think a lot. i love this story update soon..Author's response
i shall. I'm working on a new chapter now.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-07
Oh haha p.s loved the chappie title. fitted great with the er..chapter?Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-08
I would like to request a rating point that is given for extraordinarily clever usage of literary devices. The whole first paragraph with the repetition of time/ parallel sentence structure... stutters... Wonderful.
It really pulled me into the story and it also pointed towards the fact that time is pressing in a situation like this. Every minute, probably every second counts.
Total KUDOS!!!
I can imagine very well that this chapter was hard to write. But you couldn't tell after reading it because you did a great job.
At the risk of being a superfluous (and not effective) repetition: Kudos. :)Author's response
i've said it before but i'll say it again-i love your reviews. they have substance. After reading this review I can actually believe that chapter was a good one. I had such a hard time conveying the feeling on numbness and urgency at the beginning. Sean had to be turned off but functional. And then for the rest of it I was so afraid to fall into a stereotypical "emo" story. Glad to see it didn't.
btw: Kudos is one of my favorite words. Its just fun.
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