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CH35 - What Is The World Coming To
3 reviewsDumbledore confronts Harry and the conversation gets a little heated
5Exciting
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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2007-01-10
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I knew Dumbledore's idea was gonna backfire, I just didn't know it was gonna backfire that spectacularly. I figure at this rate Dumbledore will have completely alienated Harry by the time Harry reachs 7th year if he even goes back to school that is, I mean he really doesn't need to if I remember correctly from previous chapters. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-01-10
1 small thing that I would fix is the Potter statement you made in regards to Minerva. She only ever calls him Mr. Potter, not Potter. Additionally, you used: For the first time in many years he looked his age. Alot of people use that, and therefore anytime I see that phrase, I cringe. There are alot of firsts. I look forward to your next update, hopefully it will include Fleur and something naughty. SMILES!
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