- I really like your Mewtwo. Not sure if I quite get it - he's the mysterious narrator? - but the idea of Mewtwo finally not being so emo is pretty different and makes sense at the same time, and the dialogue is very natural, telling without being too obvious about it.
Author's responseYes, Mewtwo as the narrator was the goal I wrote with--my inspiratin for the fic was the voice actor that Mewtwo and the narrator have in common, and some dialog in an early episode in which Misty and the narrator argue. The whimsical, affectionate tone in the narrator's voice in the opening of Mewtwo Strikes Back didn't help. =D Anyway, thanks for your commentary! I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner... my e-mail keeps eating my review notifications.
(#) TheGoldenPokemon 2013-06-02I enjoyed reading this- even if it sounded a little too sad for me (I have such a sensitive heart) I liked it. I figured out that the narrator is Mewtwo only when I reached the last chapter XD
Keep it up, your stories are from the greatest I've ever read!
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