(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-22When Gee found her she was trying to decide between regular Hershey's Chocolate and Hershey's with almonds. It was one of the more important decisions in life. I absolutely loved this line and how you throw in little bits of humor when the issues can be so serious. Also, the chapter title this time was great. Everything seemed to fit nicely together. My only issue is that I wish your chapters were longer! I just can't seem to get enough.
Great job and I can't wait till the next chapter!
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-01-22i was wondering bakc in the NYEchap isnt anybody like taking photos, and here i got my answerr..i hope Monica doesnt get too stressed bout it. then again, how couldnt she when there's the husband issue haunting in the back.. hmm.
i liked the way you added little humor in this and also the wway you write it the way that it's almost real, all the signings and Mikey crabbin latte..:]. its like readin the script of a movie while your watching it. ive said it before, but i say it again.
and that was SO NOT 'just a nightmare':o wants badly know what it was about
love it, so..update when you can!:]
Author's responseThanks for the review. Actually there are tons of "real" things in this story that probably go unnoticed. Thats cause I do tons of research. You will get your answer to the "nightmare" soon.
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