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A Little More Touch Me
(#) lclutebark 2007-01-30
Oh man! hahahaha
That was brilliant! hahhahaAuthor's response
Thank you lady. You so made me smile :-) :-)A Little More Touch Me
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-30
Lmao. I love it.
The damn bacon always ruin everything.
Anyway I love it. Please update soon.Author's response
I wish I could rate this review 'funny'. But they don't let me do that. Oh well, will just have to settle for telling you. Cause that made me laugh out loud. ;-)A Little More Touch Me
(#) ZippersOverYou 2007-01-30
wonderful!! good god when the cop pulled up my entire house probably echoed with laughter. That was singularly great. Wonderful job and pwease update soon for a poor child with no life.Author's response
:-) I made you laugh aloud. So proud of me! And thanks for the r+r, lady.A Little More Touch Me
(#) LOVELA 2007-01-30
Ha ha ha. What a tease. I'm talking about both the author and the character in the story.
Great Update.Author's response
Hey, you got me down to a T. You cheeky monkey, you :-)A Little More Touch Me
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-30
Okay, so I hovered between 'hot' and 'funny' and decided on 'hot' because I think the world can always use a little more sexy.
Loved it as always! The cop showing up was just great. I can't wait until the party. Wahoo!Author's response
Parties are so much fun to write. I hope I'm not over-doing them in my fics though. Ah, well, I don't really care anyway. Party will be up soon. And thank you for the hot point. Treasured!! xxA Little More Touch Me
(#) fob4ever 2007-01-30
haha. the cop thing was timed perfectly. I really wanna know whats gonna happen at that party man! sheesh, keep me waiting like this.
C:Author's response
Just waiting for a plot bunny to creep out of hiding. But I predict it will happen soon. Thanks for r+r xA Little More Touch Me
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-31
Ha ha ha. Amazingly funny. You could teach Wiggie a thing or two, ma'am.
My favorite part would have to be when Joe is like "Yes, thanks for that." I can soooo imagine him saying that in a situation like this, wit his lispy voice and all. ;)
As Gwen pointed out, it was hard to decide between "hot" and "funny". Yet, I had to opt for funny. Because the world can always use some more humor, too. ;)
You're such an enrichment to ficwad, lady!Author's response
Aw, of all the nice things you've ever said I think that's the greatest!!
And I'm so happy you all got the humour, I wasn't sure if there would be rage at ruining "the moment" haha. Thanks, again, lady xxA Little More Touch Me
(#) prettypoizon 2007-02-01
ROFL
My friend called right at the part where the cop catches them, and I was laughing so hard. I tried to explain but she didn't get it.
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