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Changes
(#) panda_1418 2007-02-03
You're schizophrenic? Gee, that makes four of us. Haha, I'm joking. So she's got a split personality now, eh? AND violet eyes. Creeeeeeeeeepy. But Original, so that's what I'll rate it. Update soon!Changes
(#) gucci84 2007-02-05
Ouuuu this is good!
It happens a little fast in some spots. I didn't know Delilah wasn't in her bed when Julius went to wake her up until I read lower. Specify their findings as they go along.
Other than that, good story idea. This really had my eye brows raise. Good job. Update soon.
-GucciChanges
(#) crispycrunch 2007-12-22
it was a bit confusing but it was gud :P great job!! yesh update soon :P i mean when ur done ur french h/w that is ;)
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