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• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) Anaknisatanas 2007-02-03

  The baby talk made me think of Bellatrix... now I'm really wondering the identity of the Death Eaters who wish to defect. I also am wondering what Harry will do in response to Nott's attack. He has to make a show of doing something... or at the very least something that will calm those who are allied with him. I await your next update.

  Author's response

  One of the three, as you have guessed is Bellatrix. And you will have to wait a few more chapters before you can find out about the identities of the others. Harry will be doing something - more on that in Chapter 6. Thanks for your encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) Black_s_Phoenix 2007-02-03

  Seemed like Bellatrix... and it would give good reason as to why she is feared. Liked the Harry/Cho move towards reconcileation as well and hope that it leads to Harry/Cho.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the encouragement, and your opinion regarding the ship. Bellatrix is certainly one of the most feared Death Eaters, and she has quite a few reasons to be angry with Voldemort. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) slashslut 2007-02-03

  i love quick updates happy dance great chappie!!

  Author's response

  Thanks for the encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) red_jacobson 2007-02-03

  very interesting; although I'm curious as to why Bellatrix is leaving Voldemort.
  
  red

  Author's response

  Bellatrix and her colleagues have a lot of reasons for leaving Voldemort. You will find out why soon enough. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) mathiasgranger 2007-02-03

  Interesting chapter, I look forward to finding out how this faction of deatheaters aim to actually cooperate with Harry.
  
  Thanks for writing,
  Matt
  
  P.S. H/Hr please....or maybe H/HR/Cho but not H/C straight out.

  Author's response

  Ah - the Death Eaters are not so much for Harry, as they are against Voldemort. You will find out their aims soon enough.
  
  As for the ship, I am not sure, and I cannot decide until the polls are complete. Whatever the ship, both Hermione and Cho will play a vital role in the story, and the ship will be incidental to the main plot.
  
  Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) DarkeGray 2007-02-04

  I like that Bellatrix is the assumed defect in the DEs, also like the desperation it seems that Voldy is going to get recruits, picking on school childern. Oh well, I am happy that you had Harry and Cho 'make up' but am hoping you will not get them back together again, I think there disasterous attempt at dating showed them they would be better off as friends. I think this should be a H/Hr, you let Harry realise that Cho isn't right for him and that he has missed what was right under his nose and get him together with Hermione.

  Author's response

  Thanks for your opinions regarding the ship - I am not yet certain what the ship will be. But seriously, the ship is only incidental; the main focus will be on the plot, in which both Hermione and Cho play a very important role, regardless of the ship.
  
  As for your remarks regarding the Death Eaters and Voldemort - Malfoy was tasked with recruiting Death Eaters since the beginning of the year, since Voldermort is really short of manpower. As for Bella - well, it is a story of its own, and you will have to wait until we come to it.
  
  Thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) DrT 2007-02-04

  Young Nott should know better than not protect his back! Looking forward to the next chapter, as always.
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Young Nott made the mistake of underestimating young Malfoy, unfortunately. He is not going to do it a second time. Thanks for your reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros
  

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) Dragen 2007-02-07

  Malfoy and his bodyguards made a mistake in attacking Nott's...
  
  So the Death Eaters that want out, helped the Grangers... nice.

  Author's response

  Malfoy is just desperate to protect his influence in the Slytherin Common Room. The Death Eaters have excellent reason for leaving the Dark Lord - what better way to get in Potter's good books than by helping one of his friends? Thanks for your encouragement and thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros

• Black Vengeance - 1

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-19

  Very nice use of Bella. I look forward to the next chapter now.

  Author's response

  Ah - Bella. Bella is a story by herself. She has a large role to play.
  
  Thanks for the encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
  Regards,
  Maidros

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