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• To Rewrite History

  (#) ahmed_920 2007-02-06

  I think the story is very cool and the idea is new and nice but do u not think that u jumped suddenly from making hostile to friendly without explaining all that went on.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) dsfjr1190 2007-02-06

  Good start. Can't wait to see the Harry/Weasley confrontation when he shows up with the Malfoys.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) AnnF 2007-02-06

  Quite interesting.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) Skoell 2007-02-07

  after the first chapter i thought "interesting story idea, lets see where it will be going...", NOW i found myself confused!
  
  i can't rate this story because i don't have an apropiate choice given...while it is ooc, it's fiction so that's normally given...
  closest to describing it would be train wreck...BUT only up to now...how is it that after the first chapter, there is such a big leap? harry is suddenly a friend of nott and bullstrode? tutoring for arithmency and runes? while in third year, where the classes only started -even if he didn't took them-? why not help from gryffindors? or logically ravenclaws??
  
  letters to mafalda and the weasleys are good! but why suddenly writing the malfoys???? he and draco have their own history, especially after dementor-look-a-like and hippogriff incidents in third year...harry and lucius had very serious trouble in his second year...heck, lucius let a basilisk loose in hogwarts and now suddenly...poof...all's big friendly and chummy??
  
  i hope desperately that this will clear up in the next chapter!

• To Rewrite History

  (#) DrT 2007-02-07

  You either skipped a few chapters for have posted a chapter from another story here. The two chapters really don't go together as is. You need to explain the HUGE difference between chapter 2 and canon. I'm not saying it can't be done, just not as you've done it. If you explain it in chapter 3, you needed to have posted it along with chapter 2.
  
  "T"

• To Rewrite History

  (#) kcgx23 2007-02-07

  Great chapter, there are so few stories where Harry gets along with the Dursleys, I like it.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) slashslut 2007-02-09

  the dursleys are nice? the malfoys aren't evil? welcome to wonderland, alice:) i like the twists and am looking forward to seeing how you characterize the other cast of characters!

• To Rewrite History

  (#) Dragen 2007-02-10

  What a great second chpater;
  
  So Gordon is Second cousin of Millie Bulstrode, who would have thought, and he knows a bet about the wizarding world then??
  
  SO... Harry is making friends with the Malfoys, who would have thought, does this mean that Lucius will not rejoin Voldemort or is he going to spy for Harry? I hope Ron and the rest will be ok with this, but I don't think so, speaclly with Ron.

• To Rewrite History

  (#) madengineer 2007-02-12

  one word: confusing.
  
  It just jumps from one point to another...this more like you had a bullet point format points and u just added ands and what to make it a paragraph!
  
  MadEng

• To Rewrite History

  (#) hpssslashfan 2007-02-15

  I like that fact that Harry FINALLY took the preverbial bull by the horns and send a letter to Madam Hopkirk.
  
  Whooo hooo! :-)

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