(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-13I think it's a great start! I would probably be a little frantic if I thought my bf was going to break up with me just because he was going on tour... I guess that just gives proof that it wasn't true love. And I think my girl Ava and your boy Oliver are related... hmmm, Lemmings. lol. :) Anyway, on to the next chapter!
Author's responseLOL. Oh...to be honest I didn't even notice the same name. I had asked my friend for a last name and that was the first thing that had come to her mind LOL. I will go back and change it though, thank you!
- I really like the name of the band, Lucid Eyed. Where did you come up with that?
Great chapter btw.
Author's responseTo be honest..I have no idea. I was just sitting here and I blurted out Lucid Eyes. It seems fitting for my character Oliver, as you will see later on. Lol and thank you btw :)
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