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• Falter

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-13

  Ach! Oliver is too sweet! Seriously.
  I think my favorite part was Peyton singing to the cd and Oliver giving her a strange look... I've been there too many times; singing loudly in the car/people embarrased etc. Anyway, Patrick better step it up because I'm starting to really like Oliver. ;) I can't wait for more!!

  Author's response

  Believe me, his sweet act is just a game for now lol. It never lasts. The car scene actually took place in my friends car, hence the reason for it, I just couldn't help it. Patrick will be definetly stepping up his game...especially in the chapters coming up..so thank you so much! Your too sweet!

• Falter

  (#) x-xJafax-x 2007-02-14

  I love tis already !! and its wow so very good !! can't wait for the next chapter !!
  Much love
  xx

  Author's response

  Aw thank you very much. Don't worry the third chapter is being written as I type, and so far its gotten very interesting tee hee.

• Falter

  (#) riaryder 2007-02-14

  Pretty intrigued by this story.
  Loving it so far.
  Hope you keep going, I'll be reading x

  Author's response

  Oh, I will be. I'm currently working on Chapter 3. Hopefully if I get out of work on time and stuff tomorrow..there might be another one up by tomorrow night!

• Falter

  (#) LiveLoud 2007-02-19

  You are one good writer.
  I love it so far.
  It was very EXCITING to say the least.

  Author's response

  Aw thank you so much for the writer comment, it made my day!

• Falter

  (#) CoraLiz 2007-02-26

  You what to know what I think?
  I think it's definately on the GOOD side (not bad lol)!

• Falter

  (#) cnharp 2007-02-28

  love in the air???? can't wait for the next chapter!!!

• Falter

  (#) Taliax 2007-04-02

  Eeeek!
  I love it even more now.
  
  And ut oh..somethings going to happen with her and Patrick.Eek!
  
  [Talia]

  Author's response

  "Ut oh" lol that was awesome. And thank you for loving it.

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