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• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) duckapple 2007-02-15

  Eeeek.
  I...just wow...they have to fix this.
  You don't understand.
  They have to.

  Author's response

  lol. we've got a big big mess on our hands tonight...sing it..cough anyway.
  honestly love...don't hold your breath. it'll get there eventually but it's gonna take some time. 2 stubbron teenagers are never a good mix.

• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-02-15

  I'm so gutted for Molly and her inexperience.....

  Author's response

  yea, Molly likes to think of herself as being worldly. but then this happens and she's basically internally killed by it. she'll learn eventually...

• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) MMMramen 2007-02-15

  Interesting indeed. Not bad for having written it at work. And I didn't notice any errors. Mine are usually overrun with them...so I'm not a reliable spell check, I guess.
  
  That Patrick. I want to believe he'll redeem himself in an incredibly sweet manner, but at this point, I don't know if he can. That was pretty low. And that girl could have the syph...or crabs...or something itchy. Shame on him.

  Author's response

  yea...I was going to have the girl be Allison, but there was a very violent reaction from both of my 'advisors'. Apparently their lives would be made better for never having to hear from the evil blonde again.

• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) danceislife 2007-02-15

  hahah written at work. You bad girl. Some lady was fired because she had a journal she wrote in to look busy. Oy vey. Oh, and I could kill Patrick for being dumb.

  Author's response

  i know shame on me. and patrick needs a good swift kick in the ass

• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) Frenchie189 2007-02-15

  Aww, poor Molly.
  Damn Patrick.
  
  I love this story.
  Please update soon.

  Author's response

  yea that seems to be the general concensus right now--patrick sucks.

• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) riaryder 2007-02-15

  Geez, that's got to hurt.
  Poor Molly, what a sucky hogmanay.
  Revenge might be good!!

• Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-17

  Well... Patrick seems to be a highly sexual being. In this story at least. So maybe sex is to him what alc is for Molly? Hurting a person you really care about usually only backfires in the end. So I feel equally sorry for both of them.
  
  Stupid kids... sighs

  Author's response

  Patrick as a highly sexual being is a bit of a fantasy of mine...so maybe I have indulged a lil bit. And ding ding ding give the girl a prize she gets it! lol.

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