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in which Molly is hungover, we meet the new chick, Molly and Patrick talk. Yea. lotsa stuff happens.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-02-15
I really just wanna be the first to review...wait, I haven't read it yet. I'm sure it's great. I'll review again after reading...Author's response
lol.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-02-15
Melodramatic? Naw.
"I had him first." -Why I adore Molly.
What is this, gang up on Molly? She's insecure, she's working at it. She doesn't really think she's perfect, does she? I never got that impression. Far from it. I think she's very aware of it, and it scares her.Author's response
well...yea. Molly realizes she isn't perfect, but at the same time she doesn't see her faults all that clearly. Its like she can't acknowledge them/work on them. So to everyone else it comes across as her thinking she's "perfect"Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-02-15
Holy....wow.
I love you.
Times a million.Author's response
i totally love you more.
i'm gonna win this debate btw. ;)Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-16
"Every You Every Me" Is a phenomenol song, I couldn't stop listening to it at one point.
Bridget - I really admired you for writing this chapter. I just want you to know I appreciate all the hard work you're doing on this because I am having such a good time reading it, I mean that.
Keep on Sweety!
xxxAuthor's response
awe thanks! warm fuzzy bunny feelings and all that. :)
I'm kind of at a juncture in the story that is proving really difficult to write. I knew "Part 3" was gonna be a bitch and a half 'cause its leading up to a pretty big plot point and I'm trying to set the stage for that so when it happens everyone isn't like "Okkk did you just THROW that in there?"
It's a friday and I'm probably going to a local show tonight after work for a band I know but after that I'm planning on spending the night writing as much as I can so expect a massive update this weekend--I have to get a lot churned out 'cause I've got TAI & MCR coming up this next week & major meetings at work too.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) riaryder 2007-02-16
Definitely not too melodramatic.
It was perfect. It put Molly's flaws on display just perfectly. And you must know we all love the drama,yes?
This must be getting tough on you and I totally admire that you manage to consistantly produce quality chapters. There's no such thing as a filler in this story. So well done, and keep it up xxAuthor's response
Thank you so much. seriously that means a lot. One thing I'm always afraid of is if people are going to read a chapter and go "that wasn't necessary". I sit there (for hours sometimes) trying to inject some form of substance into each chapter--essp with how long the story has gotten filler would be annoying--
I'm a bit of a drama "whore" myself, but I know people don't always like it. And I feel as though I've lost that humor edge that the first part of the story had (I'm trying to bring it back but the subject matter doesn't exactly lend itself to being humerous)--so I hope no one hates that too. I litterally eat, sleep, and live this story and my job (which thankfully includes shows or I'd cry) so yea it's getting difficult, but I'll perservere. A friend of mine was like 'dude you need to take a break' 'cause we were at dinner and I started discussing upcoming plot points with her. But I seriously can't stop writing it--those 2 weeks of writers block were actually painful.
so it means so much when I hear that people love my baby. lol. Ok done patting myself on the back. gotta go book a stage...'cause I just got talent and have no where to put them. eeeep.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) MMMramen 2007-02-16
I love your drama. And Placebo. And you. And this story. I'm just swelling with love. Perhaps I should see a doctor. Have I mention how amazingly flawed Molly is? I love that too. I'm sick of all these perfect little whores, including the ones that star in my stories, Molly is such a breath of fresh air...or smog...I don't know. But I have to give her credit. She admitted that she missed her Patrick. I think she just conveyed it poorly. I love that. OK, now I'm gushing. And rambling Point? Oh yes, there will be points.Author's response
lol. i don't even know how to respond to that except to say "thank you. love you too"Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-17
"Too melodaramatic"??? We got teenagers here after all. ;)
I loved this chapter. Hurt pride and repressed feelings. This is so good!
The points should make up for my inablility to leave meaningful reviews anymore.Author's response
very true. teenagers do suck. ...I'm growing the inability to respond to reviews anymore. eeep.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Frenchie189 2007-02-17
Aww, it's sad.
I feel bad for both Molly and Patrick.
I love it.
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