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Chapter 4: Dark Dreams; Crimson Nightmares
4 reviewsNaruto's fate rests in the hands of those he loves. Now the team must find a way to uncover the truth or risk losing their leader - their friend - forever. Yet sometimes reality is far more frigh...
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A Promise to Keep
(#) marikunin 2007-02-17
:: nearly dies ::
continue! :)Author's response
Okay, really, if this kills you your family isn't going to come after me, right? I really couldn't handle killing off my readers. XDA Promise to Keep
(#) Entilzah 2007-02-19
Ok... let the record show that you are back on your "A Game!"
I was mesmerized and drawn in throughout the entire chapter. The mystery of what is happening is a pleasant surprise. Your characterizations of all of the characters seems spot on and really make me believe they are real people!
For today's constructive criticism: um... er... oh forget it! It was great. Write more!Author's response
Okay, but first I'm going to squeal like an excited school girl. If you'll excuse me... EEEEEEEEEEE!
I love it that I'm sucking people into my little world!A Promise to Keep
(#) thegrimwombat 2007-02-19
I've been following this (and the previous story) for a while now, but this is my first time reviewing. Just wanted to say you're doing an excellent job -- this is one of the most engaging fics I've read in the fandom!Author's response
Really? Thank you so much! I'm really trying to do my best. I want to avoid being predictable. Readers like to be taken for a loop - from what I've seen - and I hope that I'm constantly leaving people swearing at their monitors and yelling "What the f*?!?!" I think that would be my biggest compliment. XD
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