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Falter
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-18
Ah! The bells! I loved how you kept going back to that little joke. I also loved how you brought texting into the story. Patrick and Peyton are getting a little closer! Yay! And what exactly is the 'it'? Bottle could mean anything... first I thought alcohol, then I thought maybe it was a bong of some kind, then my mind went to pills... you have me on the edge of my seat my dear and I can't wait for more! Have a point and off with you to write another chapter!Author's response
I know the bells!! I just had to throw that in there. It wasn't planned at first...but I had to find a cute way to end it, cause the next chapter is pretty rocky. And that bottle will remain a mystery for awhile...insert scary music here lol.Falter
(#) LiveLoud 2007-02-19
Really great chapter. I have to agree with Gwen in the 'bells' thing. You have kept that little joke going over three chapters and it fit so well.
Poor Joe needs a girl to keep him from blurting out random things and to keep him fed. He is always hungry in all his storys!
Write another chapter ASAP lady!Author's response
Lol...is someone a Joe fan?? haha yes I loved the little bells thing too, I say that to everyone..'Don't worry I'll be there with bells on!' but I have not yet gone to the extreme that Peyton has LOL.Falter
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-02-19
I love this story.
I hope you update soon.Author's response
Aw thank you! And don't worry..I should be doing it right as I'm typing this lol.Falter
(#) CoraLiz 2007-02-26
So does Duane, Oliver's best friend notice the change in him as well, or is this just a Peyton thing?
Write more, write more, write more!Author's response
He knows what happened to him before, but he hasn't noticed anything yet. Only Peyton has been able to because shes with him 24/7, but when the tour starts, don't think that no one will notice.
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