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The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-02-21
Haha, I loved it how Patrick was confused.
I love this story please update soon.Author's response
Yes, Patrick confused is always interesing... :) And thanks bunches for always leaving me such nice reviews!!! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-02-21
you're a featured story!
i just wanted to let you know and i don't really knw what it means but i was sure excited!!!!
xxxxxoAuthor's response
It was??? You know, I don't know what that means either or how that is even chosen... But I'm glad you were excited!!! Now I'M excited. lolThe Mistake
(#) CoraLiz 2007-02-22
You are so evil, Gwen.
*She pushed herself away from the wall and moved further into the bathroom. "Right, well I guess I'll take that shower now."
Patrick's eyes glistened with something Ava couldn't quite place. "You do that."
Ava felt her pulse quicken. Giving him a sharp nod she pushed the door shut between them. As soon as she heard that metallic click she let out a breath she didn't even realize she had been holding. Patrick was looking all too sexy again, and if she wasn't careful she'd end up doing something stupid.*
More of this please. And I can't believe you brought in the mob! Is it really them, or is the mob just part of the story to cover up the real killer? You need to update so I can give you a point before it gets all full again.Author's response
yes, I'm completely tacky with the mob thing, but I really just couldn't help myself... Thanks for the lovely review my dear!
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