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The Mistake
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-02-18
AWWW GWEN!! I loved it, as always! lol I think I have it figured out, especially with the clues you left here this time. I didn't think about it until just now. I still think its the same person...but I think its a little different now..does that make sense? Probably not LOL. HAHA and I loved how cute the whole "going to take a shower" scene was...I wanted Ava to pounce Patrick..but alas that didn't happen.
PS. The name drop was awesome lol...I loved how you came up with the idea of how their CD looks
PSS. You spelled my name wrong lol its Rindi..but don't worry..your not the first or the last LOLAuthor's response
I'm glad you liked it! Makes my day, seriously. (Ok, I think I say 'seriously' too often) Anyway, it's supposed to be a little confusing, and I don't think I'm sneeky enough to really hid what's going on so you might very well have the answer, lol. And I hope you liked the CD cover!!!
PS, I fixed your name, so sorry about the mess up!The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-02-18
UHH-MAZING !!!
i approve.
xxxxxxo.Author's response
I'm glad! Thank you so much!The Mistake
(#) JokeMeKisses 2007-02-18
My mouth dropped the second he mentioned that she had helped sovlve the case, but I hadn't been expecting it at all. I adored this chapter, the way your writing flows is incredible. One second I'm admiring how adorable Ana and Patrick are together, and the next I know who is trying to kill her. Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's response
Yay! I'm glad you didn't see that coming! Thank you for the amazing review!The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-19
As usual, an awesome chapter, but you're way cruel, don't entice me with alon time with Patrick and then get her all distracted....that's just rude...
I loved it. The ending part was genius.Author's response
I'm very sorry to be rude. It is not my intention to be so! But I'm glad you liked it anyway... :)The Mistake
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-02-19
awesome chapter! please update soon! the 'going to take a shower' scene was great. have a rating point!Author's response
Ooo! A rating point? That's just what I'v always wanted! And I'm glad you enjoyed the shower bit. ;)The Mistake
(#) LaBellaMuerte 2007-02-19
love it! keep writting more!Author's response
I shall!!! Thanks!The Mistake
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-02-19
Omg...
It does all fit now.
Yeah,I've been having problems with ficwad too.It wouldn't let me onto the site for some reason.Author's response
I'm glad you're seeing the connections. And Ficwad can really be evil at times. Grr!The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-02-19
:D Can I just say? LOVE IT!!!! You are most definatley the best writer on here. I totally figured it out. But I'm keeping my lips sealed for the sake of others(I'm really bad at that kind of stuff so I'm trying to be careful) By the way, thank you once again. When I saw my name, i totally flipped out. :D thank you so much!!!!!! lol, well i'd better get back to my homework. please update soon and try not to keep the fans waiting!
~Chelsea
P.S. Thank you once agan! I really appreciate it!Author's response
Yes! Say you loved it because that totally makes my day oh so much brighter, but you seriosuly overestimate my abilities if you think I'm the best! (Even though that makes me so happy!!!) Go read stuff by the members of DoJ or moocow or Hips-n-hearts. Theirs is equally as good!
And no problem with the name! I aim to please and I'm glad it made you happy!!!The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-19
What an INCREDIBLE chapter! :)
I am not surprised that I can't rate this up anymore.
I did NOT see this coming. Wow, I am excited.
And totally amused about people asking her for autographs and Patrick standing around like a complete no-name dude. ;)
Your updates always make my day.Author's response
Thanks! You know, I'm glad you were surprised with the end. :) I was really afraid I would get bad reviews on this chapter because of it... I mean, when is the mob ever in FOB fanfic? Sounds a little out there, but hopefully I can pull it off... or else I'll get some bad rates and reviews. Oh well... I'm glad you liked!The Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-02-21
I hope you will be pleased to know that I DID NOT see that coming. At all.
Great chapter, definitely original. And I would rate it so, but you've already maxed the ratings. Nice one!! You rock!Author's response
Oo, yay, I surprised you with that, eh? That does please me. :) Anyway, thank you for all your wonderful reviews and making my ego substancially larger. lol. YOU rock!
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